I loved it. Such a pure game, in a sea of despair online, I find this little gem that reminds me that I can’t think about the past. Because I’ll be alive.
Despite its translation issues, its sometimes on the nose and over-sincere theming, and its intimacy to a heart distant from mine, I was happy to give you a chance.
(potential spoilers ahead for the prologue) I have never lived in a town like that, nor a place like that . I live in a country I am blessed to have been born in, and I'm the one who never changes, the city always does. I'm a man who has never loved a woman, truly a distant heart. Despite that, I had soursop for the first time only a few days ago. It was very tasty, one of my new favourite fruits. Thank you for the chance you gave my heart, to feel a little of what you have felt. Grins and tears are worth plenty more than some slight discontents. The usage of the frame was very cute, and I appreciated the way you utilized the medium of text in motion (speed, size, movement). There are so many wonderful choices, like everything about Vo-Mit's text, the "come find me" scene, and the chess queen text explosion put a grin on my face. I cried more when the main character smoked, or when they talked about Mytosis's scripts (and when they wanted to be an actress, oh my...) than the outro. Perhaps the little moments move me more than the big ones, no matter how well executed. There is so much more to compliment, but that is alright. There will be others who come with compliments for a work like this, I'm sure.
I don't like nostalgia. And vaporwave never did interest me. But I don't want to return to my immortality. These sorts of things don't matter in the face of sincerity. I do cringe back a little from just how sincere it is, but that is alright. You were brave for releasing something so personal. And I appreciate even the decisions that are too obvious or over-sincere. You have yet another person waiting for more of everydayness in me :).
Beautiful, funny, sincere, and most importantly hopeful in the face of despair. You can't think about the past. You will be alive.
Nouzi, you always nail your presentation, and every time you put out something new, you always improve. I will always remember the first time you messaged me and asked to collaborate on your first game. You were so excited, and you continue to be as time passes. Every release since then shows how talented and sincere you really are. Don't change ever.
Honestly, I teared up. It's such a beautiful prologue that leaves you wanting more after every single interaction, and the art style is incredibly unique and distinct. I absolutely can't wait to see where the story goes from here! 10/10
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I loved it. Such a pure game, in a sea of despair online, I find this little gem that reminds me that I can’t think about the past. Because I’ll be alive.
Despite its translation issues, its sometimes on the nose and over-sincere theming, and its intimacy to a heart distant from mine, I was happy to give you a chance.
(potential spoilers ahead for the prologue)
I have never lived in a town like that, nor a place like that . I live in a country I am blessed to have been born in, and I'm the one who never changes, the city always does. I'm a man who has never loved a woman, truly a distant heart. Despite that, I had soursop for the first time only a few days ago. It was very tasty, one of my new favourite fruits. Thank you for the chance you gave my heart, to feel a little of what you have felt. Grins and tears are worth plenty more than some slight discontents. The usage of the frame was very cute, and I appreciated the way you utilized the medium of text in motion (speed, size, movement). There are so many wonderful choices, like everything about Vo-Mit's text, the "come find me" scene, and the chess queen text explosion put a grin on my face. I cried more when the main character smoked, or when they talked about Mytosis's scripts (and when they wanted to be an actress, oh my...) than the outro. Perhaps the little moments move me more than the big ones, no matter how well executed. There is so much more to compliment, but that is alright. There will be others who come with compliments for a work like this, I'm sure.
I don't like nostalgia. And vaporwave never did interest me. But I don't want to return to my immortality. These sorts of things don't matter in the face of sincerity. I do cringe back a little from just how sincere it is, but that is alright. You were brave for releasing something so personal. And I appreciate even the decisions that are too obvious or over-sincere. You have yet another person waiting for more of everydayness in me :).
i'm glad you gave it a chance, honest opinions like yours always keep myself moving in this silly story making hobby. thank you so much!!
Can I enter your house?
are you an eccentric human being?
90% of the world is covered in flowers and I await certain annihilation. I can't wait to see where you go next.
let's keep moving!
Beautiful, funny, sincere, and most importantly hopeful in the face of despair. You can't think about the past. You will be alive.
Nouzi, you always nail your presentation, and every time you put out something new, you always improve. I will always remember the first time you messaged me and asked to collaborate on your first game. You were so excited, and you continue to be as time passes. Every release since then shows how talented and sincere you really are. Don't change ever.
thank you for making my first projects a reality, they won't be the last!!!
Honestly, I teared up. It's such a beautiful prologue that leaves you wanting more after every single interaction, and the art style is incredibly unique and distinct. I absolutely can't wait to see where the story goes from here! 10/10
Im really glad you liked it <3